The sea invades the coastal cliffs,
Battling against its stalwart stone,
Devouring its surface bit by bit,
And leaving it gullible and prone.
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I love poems about the forces of nature and this is no exception. Wonderfully crafted. Andrew x
marvelous theme and flow, Ernestine. two great strengths and eternal change. wonderful work. -Tailor
This is an excellent poem Ernestine depicting the powerful drama of incensed opposites. Strong compelling images and very well paced piece. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
I love the way you put a picture together... wonderful!
this poem teaches me to be assertive and relentless...and with the rising sea level the power of the ocean on the rocky coastline is felt eversomore now...this poem generated powerful emotions in me...love...nalini
The beautiful power of nature caught perfectly in your poem.
One can almost hear the sea roar (or battle drums) and then clearly see its victory. Very powerful.
Nature, constantly reforming, a wonderful ballance portrayed through words Love duncan X
Poetess E.>>>Powerful slice of vintage Northover Verse! GREAT STORYLINE W/ TYPICAL DETAIL & STERLING IMAGERY...SUPERB, YOUNG LADY! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
Anyone else think of the west of lreland during this