Ceasefire Poem by Mohammad Younus

Ceasefire

Rating: 5.0


Caught
in the crossfire
between
good and evil
fear runs
down my spine
I am sweating
My hair stands
on end
Life in the palm
of Izrael
God guide me
to your home
before that
angel of death
blows me up
to the wind

Mykoul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 14 November 2021

You have captured the fear perfectly. I was once stuck awkwardly between the border of Israel and Jordan with guns pointing at me from both sides! !

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 November 2021

I love the metephor in the first line Bravo! And Encore!

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