Cease-Fire Comments

A subject- as so often in your writing- that deals with protecting the weak and the innocent. I love birds and have written a number of poems about them. You might like some of them.

Oil spill-over menace was really endangering the sea creatures very badly.

a nice structure sad how we treat mother earth and her creatures, nice write

This is very intresting in how you have written each word to intail what life can do when faced with world disaters actually this is brilliant and loved how it flowed thanks for sharing

What more can i say? Sai.. This poem is great! A sublime piece.. Thanks for inviting

Cease Fire...a nice poem, well written and cleverly designed. Good play of S words.

Beautiful poem. Well penned. I like the S line continuation........... Tfs

This a very good poem. Very educative. A good write kep it up.

floored sir....opening lines of 'S' and vivid description of sea animals their endangered lives....makes it think the strong attention we really need to draw! !

I like this one really gives you something to think about... Isnt it funny how the little things are the things people find hardest to do

I like this. I wrote a poem about the destruction of the sea in a different style some time ago. It was called Fish Supper in Black and White. I would be delighted if you were to read it.

It a deep poem :) Very emotional, i feel it inside!

we are destructing out own environment you have chosen a very important topic to right on.

Man is so destructive. A good descriptive poem on an important inviromental issue. Well penned! ; D

You painted such a beautiful scenery

Nice poem. Very interesting.

Its an interesting poem. I like the way the message was being sent.

A great cry to show the contrast between building life and destroying it

A poet's plea to coexist with flora and fauna. Peace flows through this poem. CP

Interesting..