Wednesday, October 2, 2019

Cdn Three....Just @19...... Comments

Rating: 5.0

My Dawn
you were my first love born
I took you for a dance
once I had my maiden chance
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 October 2019

..., , , , , ..........A very beautiful Autumnly poem DID YOU KNOW TOP CELEBRITIES ARE October born mostly SINGERS ACTORS POETS GOOGLE AND SEE mainly in your country ......HIGH ALL POETS AND POETESSES Thanks for your kindness and vote thanks pl read other CDN POEMS 1 to11 yet also

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Anjandev Roy 03 October 2019

loss of that day.......significant. Thank u.anjandev roy.

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Savita Tyagi 03 October 2019

Great imagery and a lovely read. @19 life is viewed from a different angle.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 October 2019

.....HELLOO RMMMMMMMM... Thanks RM Poetry is just the outline on a canvas all else is imagery half truths to help others not to repeat from our or my faults Lesson to be learned Thanks RM AND OTHER POETS

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 October 2019

HELLOO RMMMMMMMM...Thanks RM Poetry is just the outline on a canvas all else is imagery half truths to help others not to repeat from our or my faults Lesson to be learned Thanks RM

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Rajnish Manga 03 October 2019

(2) Take things in your stride. Now you have your own family, own career, own achievements. It is better to accept reality and to stop living in the past. Please come out of the groove.... 'I wanted to kiss you.... makes me feel like a coward'. Thanks for sharing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 October 2019

Thanks RM Poetry is just the outline on a canvas all else is imagery half truths to help others not to repeat from our or my faults Lesson to be earnt Thanks RM

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Rajnish Manga 03 October 2019

well many tonnes of water य has since flowed down the MISSISSIPPI / NILE / the THAMES now tears can't help / the time's lost wonderful memorable games.... //.... While I appreciate your skill to transform an incident into a fine piece of poetry, one must concede that a man has to go through successes and failures many a time in different phases of his life- from childhood onward. You were hurt but that's life.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 December 2019

yes sir rm and this is life just came b y to thank you all for your readings

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