Saturday, October 19, 2019

Cdn....Burning Flame Comments

Rating: 5.0

You keep kindling the fire
lest it blow out
you keep in check no doubt
the flame also burns
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Anil Kumar Panda 21 October 2019

A fire always burns inside youths. A really beautiful expression of raw love that shines inside a young heart. 'Love thyself as you alone can keep alive what in love you desire to strive'... is so nice. Thanks.

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Anjandev Roy 20 October 2019

Well depicted.Thank u, dear poet.anjandev Roy.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 October 2019

WOW THANKS KEVIN YOUR THE YUH OF NOW...WELL KEEP IT UP STANDING Great analogy, youth is a fire that burns with temper and hot with ego and arrogance, love and are the sizzle that make it crispy tender. As we age it takes more to keep that fire burning, and roaring with momentum. Fury is a younglings game. Fabulous work poet 10! T H A N K S AGAIN KEVIN

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Kevin Patrick 19 October 2019

Great analogy, youth is a fire that burns with temper and hot with ego and arrogance, love and are the sizzle that make it crispy tender. As we age it takes more to keep that fire burning, and roaring with momentum. Fury is a younglings game. Fabulous work poet 10! ! !

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