Cdn.... Bepragmatic Friends Poets Spiritualists Believers Poem by me poet yeps poet

Cdn.... Bepragmatic Friends Poets Spiritualists Believers



My friend modified my poem
and
wanted to prove
he can from death rise

he died
three weeks since
hasn't arrived

none can
any god bless him now
he believed
too much in Divine

He left us all
prematurely bereft

Have faith its Okay
but use your mindssssssssssss

Friday, November 1, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death,death of a friend,poetic expression,sad,spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
NO ONE HAS EVER RETURNED
ALL KNOW IT
BUT LET THEIR FAITH
OVER RULE THEIR MINDS
in SOLELY
believing in
ONLY Divine

In heaven there is no free
RED WINE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 02 November 2019

Have faith its Okay but use your mindssssssssssss... It is poetic illusion that faith comes from the heart, and when head is in deep sleep. But even a poet is not referring to that blood pumping organ when he talks of heart. Heart also is part of the head/mind which deals with feelings and emotions, which scientists call the right brain hemisphere.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 November 2019

but let FAITH NOT VER RULE NES MIND

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