Cdn...17a.....Donate Your Eyes - -Continued Poem by me poet yeps poet

Cdn...17a.....Donate Your Eyes - -Continued

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Donate your eyes ere it's too late
many aspirants are waiting at your gate
someone will love to see through these
they will forever bless you
as you please
the blind ones
they must have done so

the blind
my lovely eyes someone will also find
when of them we have no need
below the earth we will lie indeed

but a lucky one will see and learn to fly
imagine his happiness just try
your eyes are for me
and mine are yours
as long as we live
but hopefully
then someone else for these will long
as our eyes

no more to us will belong.

Monday, October 7, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes,natural law,nature,poem,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
DONATE YOUR EYES PART SECOND

SORRY NO SNAPS
BUT SOME REPETITION
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 08 October 2019

A great message, loved this poem.

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Graham Thompson 08 October 2019

complex but fascinating images on life love and death... I congratulate you on this hall of mirrors........ TS

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 October 2019

Donate your eyes ere it’s too late many aspirants are waiting at your gate. someone will love to see through these, they will forever bless you, as you please, the blind ones they must have done so

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