Cccc My Real-Life Indian Rapunzel And Hairdo Comments
D poem, its as long n epic as my sister's long hair ;)
My sis has long locks of hair that flow to the floor
Gosh, they get caught everywhere on hinges and door!
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This was captivating. A lesson once again to write about what you see and what you know well. I hope you have shown this to your sister. No rhyming problems.
Not much observation here though. Dis is about d hair of my very own sister. Tnx n fond wishes.
Perfect observation. Keep on observing the world and around you, that is how we learn more and more about our self. because what we see in others it is in us, let it be good or bad, they are all part of us, because we are the ones who brought them into our life.
i dont know why women like to keep long hair. though it is not my business
It is enviable tresses but love is hidden a nice poem of praise with few demerits but on the other way lunky one the door and the hinges nice 10
You did a great job describing your sister's enviable tresses. Tell her it's worth the trouble she goes through to maintain it. Long hair can be so beautiful.
Even silly issue leads us to God the creator.Nice
I love long hair and I hardly have a pony of my combs size. You have well expressed such a topic in an interesting way. Enjoyed the read.
nice you take up such an ordinary topic but present in an extraordinary way liked it
a good write about long hair. shampooing would be a huge problem I would think. nicely presented
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i especially enjoyed fad/tad and everything else. are you jealous of 'her' hair? ? this shall go to MyPoemList. bri ) =========================== and here are my two cents: Sister’s Hair Scare … [inspired by s.zaynub Kamoonpuri’s poem “Cccc My Real-Life Indian Rapunzel And Hairdo”; humor; long hair (dis) advantages; SHORT] Sis walked down ….the country lane, dragging her long hair, with great strain. After all, it weighed …at least fifty pounds. Along came a bold eagle (low-flying) . It grabbed her hair, vainly trying … to lift her, as Sis ….made horrible sounds. But try as the huge hunting bird might, it could NOT take ….(her) hair in flight, so it went back to ….its hunting rounds. (June 11, 2016)
No sir amnt jealous coz my own hair is only a few inches shorter than her. Enjoyed yor poem.