I remember
I saw Caylin
while I was walking on the Milky Way,
but Caylin was not walking,
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You have secured a permanent place in the heart of Caylin with this wonderful poem and I sure she will cherish it for long....10+++
Very interesting and stunning with idea and composition this poem is. Childhood gives fragrance of innocence. Very amazing definitely.10
The love that crosses all the boundaries such love is spread from this poem. I am sure Calyn will enjoy it if she grows to appreciate poetry like her grand mother. Hope you are doing well Akhtar Bhai.
I hope she reads this poem when she gets older so she can fully appreciate its beauty
A stunning write and thank you so much for taking the time to write such a stunning poem about my beloved grandaughter Caylin!
My Child! Give me some fragrance, a little innocence, next time I shall not walk, I shall not collect stones that slip, I shall collect aroma that spreads, you may see me swimming, for aroma I'll be flying- - - - -Wow- - A lovely poem written for the little fairy- - -Aroma of innocence.