Wednesday, June 1, 2016

Caylin Granddaughter Of Hazel Durham Comments

Rating: 5.0

I remember
I saw Caylin
while I was walking on the Milky Way,
but Caylin was not walking,
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Bharati Nayak 02 December 2018

My Child! Give me some fragrance, a little innocence, next time I shall not walk, I shall not collect stones that slip, I shall collect aroma that spreads, you may see me swimming, for aroma I'll be flying- - - - -Wow- - A lovely poem written for the little fairy- - -Aroma of innocence.

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M Asim Nehal 09 June 2016

You have secured a permanent place in the heart of Caylin with this wonderful poem and I sure she will cherish it for long....10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 June 2016

Very interesting and stunning with idea and composition this poem is. Childhood gives fragrance of innocence. Very amazing definitely.10

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Savita Tyagi 04 June 2016

The love that crosses all the boundaries such love is spread from this poem. I am sure Calyn will enjoy it if she grows to appreciate poetry like her grand mother. Hope you are doing well Akhtar Bhai.

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Kelly Kurt 01 June 2016

I hope she reads this poem when she gets older so she can fully appreciate its beauty

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Hazel Durham 01 June 2016

A stunning write and thank you so much for taking the time to write such a stunning poem about my beloved grandaughter Caylin!

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