Friday, March 30, 2007

Caving In Comments

Rating: 5.0

My support bar is collapsing,
fading away,
how will i stand,
how hard will i fall,
...
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Wandering Scarlet
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Format is good espically talented. Keep on writing

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'wow! ' is all i can say

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 April 2007

This is something like a small slide show, giving every step of the caving in. Good.

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Roben Reid 02 April 2007

all I have to say is... deep

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Madly In Love 31 March 2007

Don't we all feel that way sometimes? good poem

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Anita Blake 30 March 2007

i feel the exact same way love the poem! !

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