Saturday, March 18, 2006

Caves Comments

Rating: 3.9

There were so many,
they hung their heads
as if in shame
and swayed, unnoticed
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 20 March 2006

Very sensual...caves...hmm...

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Mary Nagy 19 March 2006

Reading this one after reading ''Carnal'' I have to wonder which you wrote first......quite a mood here. Very sensual even though it's about a cave....interesting. Good one. Sincerely, mary

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Gina Onyemaechi 18 March 2006

Second thoughts, I'll let it run. Mystery's all part of the fun, after all. Winking at you, Gina.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 18 March 2006

Thank you very much, Wendy. And Gina, of course you can inquire. I have the answer all ready. H

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Gina Onyemaechi 18 March 2006

Image-rich and sensuous. The allusions to sexual reproduction have drawn me to picture your caves as ardent young men. I like the word-play in '...so moist of what has been described...'. May I inquire as to the inspiration behind this? Half-winking, Gina.

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