Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Cause And Effect Comments

Rating: 3.9

Everything happens for a reason.
Everything has its cause.
Every city has its borders.
Every place has its laws.
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Silence Dogood
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*Trusting You* 07 December 2008

the Saint is right this is amazing. this is beyound your years... great job. a very enjoyible read. Becca

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Saint Cynosure 26 October 2008

10x10x10x10 it needs more tens...

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Leria Hawkins 18 September 2008

Agreeing with Ric, great poem. I would say you have a wonderful future ahead of you, keep writing. I'll keep reading. Regards, Leria

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Ric Bastasa 17 September 2008

what a beautiful poem for a very young 12-year old person...amazing...a ten for you.

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