Monday, February 3, 2014

Cause Comments

Rating: 4.8

Cause
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I didn’t breath when you spoke,
Fearing missing your sweet words.
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Amitava Sur
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Erika Wingo 03 April 2014

So beautiful and mesmerizing. I was very touched by the sadness expressed.

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Roseann Shawiak 31 March 2014

As I read this poem I couldn't do any of the things you didn't do, and then it all came back again, finding nothing encouraging. This poem is a beautiful feeling and flow of words ending in sadness, touching the heart. Great poem. RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur 24 February 2014

Thank you all inhaling the smell and exhaling with a gush.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 February 2014

It's a beautiful poem, sweet and sad! The cause of the sweetness and sadness is the same 'You'. A poignant thought well expressed. The title is apt. Agree with all the comments below; those of Valerie, Geetha and Valsa. Kudos for the nice comments.

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Valsa George 05 February 2014

A very poignant write breathing out the air of longing and the despair of loss! ! On certain moments, life may seem empty!

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Geetha Jayakumar 05 February 2014

A Heartfelt and Touching poem indeed. Beautiful flow of words, very pleasant and sad to read.

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Valerie Dohren 04 February 2014

Very poignant and moving poem Amitava. Well thought out.

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Amitava Sur

Amitava Sur

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