Friday, February 15, 2008

Caught Up Comments

Rating: 3.6

Caught up
in lust, in laughs
in bluster and bursts
amid tirades and trysts
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Mary Havran
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Manonton Dalan 28 January 2016

I press clear to go faster

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Who Iam 27 February 2008

Like you I make the attempt to read all new listings, but end up falling asleep in my chair, computer still running but the screen is blank from my inactivity! I gotta start earlier to complete the task. Yours is a ten all around.

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Basil Demple 23 February 2008

I too often try to read every one of the new poems listed, but as the site grows it becomes all the more daunting a task. I enjoyed your light-hearted take on this.

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Roger Cornish 20 February 2008

I love.... love... the breathless pace of this Mary... You had me gasping! Rogerxxxxx

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Thad Wilk 17 February 2008

A delightful poem to read Mary! Do you ever really get caught up? *10*! ! Thank you for sharing! ! ! Friend Thad

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 15 February 2008

Very nice lighthearted piece, Mary. Sprinklings of your natural wit & astutivity very present here & well employed.Tightly cropt structuring places the proverbial cherry on top. Sterling Work. ~ FjcR ~

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