My dream was finally becoming a reality
Without having to plan it.
The perfect opportunity was present.
I looked up and opened my arms.
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A nice rhyming poem with a smooth flow and lovely imagery! I love to write as well, have my own poetry, so please check my site too :)
Thank you so much.... blessings always. I shall, thank you for the invite!
Fantastic poem dear poetess... awesome diction.... Thanks...........
Amazing lyrics filled with heartfelt emotions. Brilliantly penned, Jeanette. Thanks for sharing.
And thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts, Irfanulla. Thank you! ! !
Brilliant artwork... it's filled with great pictures and it's very imaginative....10++
She walks in the rains, to wash her stresses and the strains, to kill her pains, and here she comes back without the stains! A beautiful poem on walking in the rains. For me it's poem of the day.
Hi Jeanette, Excellent poem filled with emotion. I felt the rain comfortably splashing on me. I felt the freedom and I felt the softness of Gods eyes looking down as I felt every raindrop. A well deserved 10+++
Hi White Tiger, so glad to hear from you. Thanks for commenting and Amen! ! !
Ever Such Beautiful Flow! ! ! ! ! Ever Such Beautiful Feel! ! ! ! ! Ever Such Beautiful Spirit Here! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Ever such beautiful comments, Becca. Thank you and Blessings always.
Great poem incorporating an invigorating experience where a dream of a caged eagle to soar high up in the sky has come when it 'rained as if there was no tomorrow'. Thanks for sharing a masterpiece and Congrats for its selection as Poem Of The Day. A needed refresher to my soul. This was my moment to smell the roses. This was a personal moment between me and God. Breaking through what holds the mind takes courage.
Yes..... very well said, Rajnish. A heartfelt thank you for your kind comment.
Every thing must be washed and refreshed maybe, and the rain is the God's Mercy to wash, refresh and give a new life to the nature, Congratulations for being chosen as poem of the day. +++++10
There is courage and there is promise in mind. Perfect opportunity has come and dream has turned into reality. Experience of raining is beautifully presented in this tender and excellent poem. This is nice to see your poem as the poem of the day. Congratulations! ....10
Thank you so much, Mr Kumar. I'm grateful for kindness and time. Blessings....
We don't have feelings like this often. So simply wonderful when we do. Beautiful to read.
I’m reminded of the joy of drenching in the rain! Many congratulations, Jeanette. Well deserved!
Jeanette, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain
Thanks again for the song of rain that sings of your reunion with the beloved God of your heart. Congrats for this poem being picked as member's POD. Subhas
Nice and Passionate Poem about Rain.. for it is a Joy and vital for life on Earth and for Nature.. Beautifully written! ! thank you for sharing this Poet! !
It was raining hard. A dream come true. My hair was perfect. Dream, rain and true life! I hope we are happy! A wonderful poem!