Life marked by resonating dreams
of unclinched hopes and soulless targets
Drawn into oblivion as drudgery creeps
withdrawing slowly ever of final failed picture
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Nice one, Mr Suresh...
Your representation of twillight thoughts
is shocking in its compelling starkness.
I like how you repeated the phrase
'As stage slipped by and so did
the unlinched hopes and soulless targets...'
And the trailing end also
'... just to become a face in the crowd '
Indeed soulful, sir- sombre and solemn Do keep writing! !
Love
Me
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Nice one, Mr Suresh... Your representation of twillight thoughts is shocking in its compelling starkness. I like how you repeated the phrase 'As stage slipped by and so did the unlinched hopes and soulless targets...' And the trailing end also '... just to become a face in the crowd ' Indeed soulful, sir- sombre and solemn Do keep writing! ! Love Me