Friday, August 10, 2007

Caught In The Middle Comments

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Life marked by resonating dreams
of unclinched hopes and soulless targets
Drawn into oblivion as drudgery creeps
withdrawing slowly ever of final failed picture
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Nitin Suresh
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Nishith Anand 03 September 2007

Nice one, Mr Suresh... Your representation of twillight thoughts is shocking in its compelling starkness. I like how you repeated the phrase 'As stage slipped by and so did the unlinched hopes and soulless targets...' And the trailing end also '... just to become a face in the crowd ' Indeed soulful, sir- sombre and solemn Do keep writing! ! Love Me

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