Caught Alive. Comments

Oh...that doesn't sound you really want to get away from it-lol! Beautiful and so passionate write, Fay. Thanks for the enjoyment :)

an alluring poem fay...says a lot more than in words

Captured, entrapped, hook line and sinker your heart is beating like a shot from a gun totally engulfed in the flame of passion your caught alive by the power of one

A very alluring piece Fay...a fascinating write 10+

a brilliant and thoughtful piece. Love the imaginative and unique direction, and word play. I note that your poetical inspiration is rife, and that your output is amazing. Best Steve

You caught me with your enchanting words Fay...lovely 10

Sweet poem Fay, as always... Andy 10

Fay, top class piece of writing. Loved the 'strongly framed' line.10/10 Ian

a sweet poem fay..check my latest post cheater on poem hunter..