Thursday, April 30, 2009

Caught! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was at the shop just about two,
When I saw you walking with Ms. Lena Blu.
Holding hands and touching smiling ear to ear,
It's funny because I thought I was your only darling dear.
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Ashley Ormon
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Jansen Felton 08 January 2011

I liked this poem it was very funny and I didn't expect that ending.

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C. P. Sharma 30 April 2009

Loved this poem, you and Lena Blu. It has drama, humour and romance and above all the fabulous poetry of frailities of human nature.10++++++++ for it. CP

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Kesav Easwaran 30 April 2009

A group caught...or caught in a group you all? A well 'caught' well written piece...your narration is perfect and vivid...thanks Ash...i liked it...10

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