Sunday, June 6, 2021

Caught Comments

Rating: ★3.5

In the spider's web
I caught the humongous fly
staring at my eye
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M.J. Lemon
fly Staring
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 June 2021

This works both for real scene depiction and metaphor. Kudos for this senryu. Also plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

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Richard Wlodarski 24 June 2021

Hitchcock would be proud!

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Varsha M 09 June 2021

So you managed to amush your secret spy in your web.

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me poet yeps poet 09 June 2021

thank your lucky stars someonne is staring lol

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 June 2021

Yes with the heat we are getting I believe it Bravo!

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MjLemon 09 June 2021

Thanks, LeeAnn. Yes the heat....and gettting hotter....

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