Wednesday, June 21, 2006

Catwalking Comments

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We are nine;
and catwalking.Clumsy
nine-year-old
feet striding proudly in
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Ballerina With Fins
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Out of the mouths of babes, as they say. Or rather, as excellently written by a mature observer of, or one imagining, the babes. I sincerely love this piece. There are some pieces in which the last verse or stanza could work all on its own. This is one of them. But I am glad that the rest was attached! Beautiful and insightful.

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