Catwalk Of Life Comments

The connection between letters makes the words but when someone with a feeling writes words, he wrote a perfection. Perfection create a new inspiration. Thank you, I bow down.

This is a great fiction having clear pictures of the present society. It may be cited... Were always on a catwalk, Along the parade of ambitious talk, Vanity explodes our sanity, Smooth skin, satin sheen, Figure lean, Wide eyed, liquid gold, Spilling along the miles, of hard cold tiles, Echoeing the truth, bouncing from the ears of youth, Like ripened fruit. Beautiful poem.10

Were always on a catwalk, Along the parade of ambitious talk, Vanity explodes our sanity, Smooth skin, satin sheen, Figure lean, Wide eyed, liquid gold, Spilling along the miles, of hard cold tiles, Echoeing the truth, bouncing from the ears of youth, Like ripened fruit. A beautiful study and a nice presentation of catwalk of the life......................10

Beautiful comments for you Hazel... Agree totally well done

A splendid piece of art...I learn more... Thank you for gifting this treasure.

As all eyes are glued on models and their tantalizing beauty, they are under constant pressure to keep up the image! Eventually time will bite! It is an inalienable truth! So unless they are able to maintain inner beauty too, they are bound to collapse after a few rounds of cat walk! When the crowd disperses, they retire to their own private griefs! The glamour and the fanfare of a beauty pageant is wonderfully brought out!

True, this is so applicable to the society in general. You've catched the feeling, really good work! And all the main moments were established really well. Thanks for the poem)

A dazzling activity has been captured in words effectively. Lines seem to move on catwalk. It end in a fact: 'eventually time will bite'.

I really like this! There are some nice metaphors and rhyming: B great job!

splendid write. i like it most. keep it up

beautiful metaphors as well as lovely write... time changes surface and decays every thing but inner beauty is evergreen...

Until darkness chases us into bed, Anxiety winding tightly around us all, We know we have to stand tall, Because eventually time will bite, As we wait nervously for our fall! - Excellent. Your use of diction is really noticeable. I like your poem

Excellent write Hazel, and a fascinating read. Beauty is only skin deep they say, but people seem to have lost sight of inner beauty. The media has a lot to answer for as they continue to perpetrate the need to look beautiful. Very well written, some great metaphors.