Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Monday, November 7, 2016

Cats (In The Style Of Roseann V. Shawiak) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Strolling into the morning light,
stalking shadows carefully,
making sure not to get stepped on
by clumsy humans,
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Kim Barney
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Spock The Vegan 10 November 2016

You have style, my friend. I love cats. I will have to think about some cat poems. Great job.

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Tom Billsborough 08 November 2016

you. are clearly feline with that air of a cat as he inspects his domain. Must say that butcher sounds jolly unsporting. I'm sure he wouldn't miss the odd duck breast here and there. Really enjoyed your take on Roseann's style. Must read the others and I might try to translate on of Baudelaire's, as he was a great cat lover too.

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Geoffrey Fafard 08 November 2016

What a tough job Kim…But you have done them all justice I believe.I just love it.Geoffrey.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 08 November 2016

Enjoyed reading the poem.Nice work.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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