'Twas foggy, and the slimy toads
Did moap and croak in the lake;
All flimsy were the aspen groves,
And the bats, no noise they make.
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I love the rhymes, very well written...I imagine the dad wearing the biggest Cheshire cat grin :)
Yes, it sounds a lot like Jabberwocky, except that Jabberwocky doesn't make sense, and this does!
I had to memorize Jabberwocky in High School. I always hated it because things could not be identified. Thanks for the comment.
Your poem is brilliant and I love it! I shall reread it several times. And thank you for the comment to Not The Bigot - I am so glad there are fellow thinkers out there.
Thank you Margaret. I'm glad you liked it.