Friday, September 16, 2005

Cathy Comments

Rating: 4.0

She was so bloomin' young!
And blooming truly is the word.
I smelled the innocence at once,
while focusing my longing eyes
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 16 September 2005

Raynette when I read some of your poems I want to come over and wash your feet (no I am not a great bible scholar) . And when I see a comment on my poems written by you it makes my day, week and more. And Mahnaz, who really must be one of my very favourites (I know I am insatiable) , it is so nice to see you here every day. Would greatly miss you if you took a vacation. H

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 16 September 2005

Beautiful...It was so touching. My heart skipped a beat....I enjoyed it. :)

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Raynette Eitel 16 September 2005

This is simply beautiful and touching (or was the touching beautiful?) . At any rate, Uriah is right. This poem does have it all. I loved every word. Raynette

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Herbert Nehrlich1 16 September 2005

Thanks Uriah, you are a scholar after my own heart. Best wishes h

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Uriah Hamilton 16 September 2005

Wow, this poem has everything, classical music, wine, Johnny Carson, massaged feminine ankle, and interesting surprise ending and the sad truth that we can't have everything.

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