Caterpillar Comments

So beautifully written

Budding joy! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

The poem in its beauty of creative writing have such good ideas and observational talents and so very nice.

lucky caterpillar good write self congratulatory

I fine that the poem has detail. I've enjoyed reading it. I hope you write all the things you wish to write. It is a good poem.

A lovely topic and well expressed

Beautiful poem :) I love how it starts with something simple as a caterpillar, then it becomes something so beautifully wonderful!

Uplifting in every sense

I enjoyed your butterflys. We've had a good summer here in England with an abundace of the beautiful peacock butterfly.

Excellent imagery for looking forward to brighter days. I can relate.

Oh my this is just beautiful...really it is sir....its beauty shown through out the whole of this wonderful write of yours...sigh...10+

Beautifully expressed..A change to a beauty.

Beautiful poem Indranil. Very interesting and insightful.

This is so beautiful.

That's crazy good poetry.

You write lovely poems uncle..

Very enlightening! I like this poem's expression of hope for the future - A butterfly was in the making. Always question everything, it brings depth to your poetry. Thank you for inviting me to read your poetry. Sorry it took so long. RoseAnn

Beautiful wording! Wearing mask of inner beauty always being mistakenly something not real us Till someone bare what lies inside thats how they see what true is and it will appear in physical slowly, ugly turn beauty when heart come to believe _SOul

I made me imagine a life cycle of a butterfly which means hope and faith for me. It was a good piece out from a direct observation from your environment. Just continue writing and I know you can express more in relating to the current issues in your country. That would also somehow enlighten others.(just an opinion)

applauds.well penned