Thursday, July 23, 2009

Catching My Heart Comments

Rating: 4.8

You want to catch my heart?
Can I trust you?
You must love it
Hold it in your hands
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Alyssa Ray
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Lynn Glover 01 August 2009

A good poem Alyssa. Very strong structure and very nice flow. Good writing. Lynn

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Shekhar Joshi 24 July 2009

nicely written.........a good theme..... liked it......good one..... ;)

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really beautiful. since i have to have more characters i'm just gunna tell you that i had to have 20 characters. i think i've got them all sooo bye! ! !

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