Never, never you can catch the freedom
Never, never you will be able to
You may only captivate wings, imprisoned serenity
You may claim beauty, what your eyes love to see
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So true, freedom cannot be taken away from humanity. Bodies can be locked up, but thoughts not. Excellent!
Never, never you can catch the freedom Never, never you will be able to You may only captivate wings, imprisoned serenity You may claim beauty, what your eyes love to see As if dove in the cage, freedom is still free, Sifting through the spaces As free as the moving breeze......impressive expression with lofty theme. A beautiful poem on freedom is amazingly shared.10
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A great contribution, Soul. I am reminded of the poets who have observed that a physical being may be incarcerated, but an essence, or a soul, or a spirit is entirely free of any and all physical boundaries. A magnificent verse!
Thanks dear, yes...freedom is spiritual that bring physical into statement of living with happiness...thank you for your great way to say.
Hi friend. Yes, one can't slave freedom. While living, breathing in the happiness of others.. is the real submission is the only cage for freedom. So, care is essential in all ways. Very nice poem Unwritten Soul.
Even if we want to capture freedom in the space we cant, we can catch the birds or free people but freedom will detach from body...You understand my idea dear. Thank u for reading my lil work, thank for reading it though my works never polished and good as others. Thanks friend
" Don't own freedom if your not living If your mind is the cage" Excellent piece to a wonderful poem.
Just read a good freedom quote, that made me think of your poem: " True freedom is being without anxiety about imperfection" (Sengchan; 6th century)
That such a sweet gesture to think about my poem...imperfection is one of the cage pillars indeed..thanks dear