Sunday, June 30, 2019

Catching Freedom Comments

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Never, never you can catch the freedom
Never, never you will be able to
You may only captivate wings, imprisoned serenity
You may claim beauty, what your eyes love to see
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Unwritten Soul
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Hans Vr 13 July 2019

Just read a good freedom quote, that made me think of your poem: " True freedom is being without anxiety about imperfection" (Sengchan; 6th century)

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Unwritten Soul 15 July 2019

That such a sweet gesture to think about my poem...imperfection is one of the cage pillars indeed..thanks dear

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Hans Vr 12 July 2019

So true, freedom cannot be taken away from humanity. Bodies can be locked up, but thoughts not. Excellent!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2019

Never, never you can catch the freedom Never, never you will be able to You may only captivate wings, imprisoned serenity You may claim beauty, what your eyes love to see As if dove in the cage, freedom is still free, Sifting through the spaces As free as the moving breeze......impressive expression with lofty theme. A beautiful poem on freedom is amazingly shared.10

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Unwritten Soul 15 July 2019

Thanks dear for always find my words in this website...thank you for your every kindness!

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Mj Lemon 04 July 2019

A great contribution, Soul. I am reminded of the poets who have observed that a physical being may be incarcerated, but an essence, or a soul, or a spirit is entirely free of any and all physical boundaries. A magnificent verse!

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Unwritten Soul 15 July 2019

Thanks dear, yes...freedom is spiritual that bring physical into statement of living with happiness...thank you for your great way to say.

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Muhammad Ali 02 July 2019

Hi friend. Yes, one can't slave freedom. While living, breathing in the happiness of others.. is the real submission is the only cage for freedom. So, care is essential in all ways. Very nice poem Unwritten Soul.

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Unwritten Soul 02 July 2019

Even if we want to capture freedom in the space we cant, we can catch the birds or free people but freedom will detach from body...You understand my idea dear. Thank u for reading my lil work, thank for reading it though my works never polished and good as others. Thanks friend

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Lyn Paul 30 June 2019

" Don't own freedom if your not living If your mind is the cage" Excellent piece to a wonderful poem.

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Unwritten Soul 02 July 2019

Thank you Lyn :) thank you for always supporting me

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