Monday, August 25, 2014

Catch If You Can Comments

Rating: 5.0

Far away, from the rim of the Earth
Beyond the oceans,
Beyond human reach,
Into the aerial pockets of the blue,
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2019

It is spring time here As promised, I shall pluck down a star for you I will fling it across the blue Catch it if you can And keep it as your own.....outstanding.expression of love. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Hazel Durham 01 July 2018

Love the title and I love this very creative and superb write that is original and takes the readers into a paradise of another world where love never dies! I wonder if you have some spare time could you comment on my poem 'Reckless Words' please

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Ramesh Rai 04 September 2014

Peak of your imagination is And the Garden of Eden Where love is a timeless theme And where blooms a million stars Beautiful and fantastic write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2014

A lovely love poem. I couldn't catch it, as it was scripted with codes of love..I loved the lines..... Let it shine in your eye And mirror the blue sky Where I shall script the code of love Too deep to decipher, my dove! Let this poem fly freely, soaring into great heights. Loved it.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 August 2014

Let it shine in your eye And mirror the blue sky Where I shall script the code of love Too deep to decipher, my dove! A beautiful poem.

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Queeny Gona 26 August 2014

A love poem and seems to be a dedication to your beloved dear mam! I loved the way, you opened the scene and ended in brevity! Holding the pain and trying to color it with love to live happy!

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Sultan Mahmud 26 August 2014

Let it shine in your eye And mirror the blue sky Where I shall script the code of love Too deep to decipher, my dove! Nice one.

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Amitava Sur 26 August 2014

Reading those lovely soothing lines I feel myself to be there ......... the calmness guides me to write.... Picking some flowers of love and peace - Being scattered in that holy place ..... very nice Valsa

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 August 2014

I shall pluck down a star for you I will fling it across the blue Catch it if you can And keep it as your own Will stay alert to catch it. You went into the blue sky and reached the limits of the stars in this poem. Beautifully expressed. Thank you.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 25 August 2014

Great imagery scripted with wonderful words and lines......Valsa....as usual the best...........

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Dinesan Madathil 25 August 2014

If someone tries to catch you, your world will cease to be there. So let none catch you at all and you be there in this explosion of this imaginative flutter par excellent the Big Bang. Good poetry has no boundaries and the poets thereof travel beyond the time and the space. Madam Valsa, it is a fine poem with its intricacy of thread!

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Neela Nath Das 25 August 2014

Let it shine in your eye And mirror the blue sky Where I shall script the code of love Too deep to decipher, my dove! - - - - -fantastic lines.

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Lyn Paul 25 August 2014

A beautiful Imaginary write Valsa with a very suited title. Thank You

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 August 2014

a fantasy but aren't these dreams real!

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