Tuesday, February 14, 2006

Catch A Whisper Comments

Rating: 4.5

this dream is fading quickly
in the manner of dreams
the knowledge I had in it
is gone
...
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
COMMENTS
Shogunoka Ledesma III 15 February 2006

well said...very subtle, fleeting, nostalgic. I like the feeling of melancholia.

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Mary Ann Najjar 15 February 2006

gosh! you let me remember that old feeling. its a short poem but you touched the readers.10 for you.

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Indiscreet Episode 15 February 2006

Yes...I know that feeling well....nicely worded

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