Monday, January 20, 2003

Catch A Little Rhyme Comments

Rating: 4.2

Once upon a time
I caught a little rhyme

I set it on the floor
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Eve Merriam
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ethan cooksley 15 May 2025

very good poem ᕦᶘ ᵒ㉨ᵒᶅᕤ

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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2019

Beautiful piece of poetry elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A lovely work of art.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 22 July 2014

Nice and interesting poem on rhymes.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 22 July 2014

Nice and interesting poem on rhymes.

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An amusing poem which can be recited so easily and seems fantastic.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 22 July 2014

I really liked this poem a lot. Easy to read and imagine...

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 22 July 2013

a beautiful poem and different kind of imagination..

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Savita Tyagi 22 July 2013

What a delightful Poem! I will save it to read it to my grand child.

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Joseph Poewhit 22 July 2013

Poem really scratches the imagination.

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Gajanan Mishra 22 July 2013

good poem, thanks, I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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I really liked and enjoyed this imaginative flight of fancy. Yet feel the last stanza does not fit. The 'tall skyscraper/ Then it grew into a kite' would be better as 'When I fed it tin and paper it became a tall skyscraper Then it shrank into a kite and flew far out of sight...' Just my opinion, the image fits better.

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Steve Smith 20 October 2009

My teacher plagerised your poem and said it was hers.

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T L 31 March 2005

i thought this was a nice poem

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Eve Merriam

Eve Merriam

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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