Saturday, October 10, 2009

Catacombs Of My Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

i feel you tip toeing through
the catacombs of my heart.
which is where you had gotten your start.
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louis rams
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Matt Mooney 18 October 2009

Brilliant concept in an attempt to define our subconscious mind.. Depth of feeling well relayed.Nice poem.10.

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Kranthi Pothineni 10 October 2009

Brilliant flow and amazing feel, combined together made this piece wonderful. Great crafting.

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sweet piece of remembering the makings of love..

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