Tuesday, March 14, 2006

Cat's Eye Comments

Rating: 5.0

The eye of night sits watching
and waiting, catching the cat
who, poised and so proper on boxes
and bricks, is tracking a rat
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Lori Boulard
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Goldy Locks 03 December 2006

Wonderful flow. last stanza was my favorite for it can be interpreted from the eye of any feline. Sus

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David Dennis 12 November 2006

Magic in this one too. Imagery and rhythm - tops.

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