Cat's Cradle Comments

Let me add my agreement to Barbara's comments. Nice imagery, neatly and succintly written, thank you June.

You better not put your finger on that string Cat's cradle is my game This says 'this is my territory so you better stay away.' I agree with Greenwolfe 1962, that the creative part of this is outstanding and very revealing self examination. Self examinations are good if they are used to correct the imperfections we ourselves believe we have. very nice write June, and I give this a 10, because of its stark, forthright language. Thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

' how can i frget what i have become? . sauch a hater of...' very nice.i like those lines very much. Wonderful!

I gave this a nine because I highly recommend this poem. The creativity was outstanding and I thought it was a very revealing self-examination. The kind you rarely see. No guile. GW62