Monday, September 19, 2016

Cat On The Wall Comments

Rating: 5.0

A cat came to sleep on the wall
To hide in the thickness of foliage
No purring emitted from his sated mouth
He just slumped down in deep sedation
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Nosheen Irfan
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Edward Kofi Louis 29 September 2016

In deep sedation! Without any bat around. Nice piece of work.

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Susan Williams 27 September 2016

Thank you for sharing this incident in your life. None of these supposedly unimportant little events are unimportant. Not to the artist who works with oils or the artist who works with musical scores or the artist who works with words. These events are the point of juncture with another living being and deepens our connections with God's creation.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 21 September 2016

Beautiful! I would have liked him to be feminine. Male cats are invariably unfriendly. Please read my poem Blackie, Blackie, Where Are You? if you have time. (10)

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Kelly Kurt 19 September 2016

~~Would that we all could find that contentment. You never fail to make me feel good with your writing. I wish we were neighbors. : -)

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Kelly Kurt 19 September 2016

Would that we all could find that contentment. You never fail to make me feel good with your writing. I wish we were neighbors. : -)

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Nosheen Irfan 20 September 2016

Hahaha. Sounds like a great idea.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 September 2016

Beautiful, .....................................................................

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Barry Middleton 19 September 2016

Great! Cats always say that.

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