When my children were young, years ago
My daughter's black cat was her pride and joy
He was used to going wherever he wanted to go
He owned the house and was a pugnacious boy
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'catastrophy': 'Cat As Trophy...............NOW I'VE UNDERSTOOD, as I'm adding your poem to Part Two of my two-part January 2023 Showcase of poems. Catastrophy! ! ! ! !
Cat As Trophy...............NOW I'VE UNDERSTOOD, as I'm adding your poem to Part Two of my two-part January 2023 Showcase of poems. Catastrophy! ! ! ! !
I'd add 's' to 'headlight'. Still I give 5 stars for rhyming and the story and the humor. ;) bri
I think 'gropin' ' is correct (for groping) , not 'grop'en'. But I appreciate the RHYME. And I usually am a llittle annoyed when a poet capitalizes the first letter of each line, but.....
Well, defense would be more dificult, but the cat still had paws and claws, right? Silly cat to not stay inside at night! Are my eyes and monitor failing me, OR...are there punctuation marks missing? ? ? ?
Latch that door better! ! Although the cat was not a chicken, I'll allow 'peck', but ONLY 'cause it forms a rhyme for you & us. ;) bri
I'd knock 'stay and' out of the last line. A true story? I'd say YOU were the 'trophy'! Just think how many times the girl and her boyfriend got to tell 'the story'. : )
Now I 'get it'. 'catastrophy' is the 'Obsolete spelling of catastrophe' bri ;) clever!