Sunday, July 3, 2005

Cat And Mouse Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Sometimes in life
I feel like a cat
Always waiting
Anticipating
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Jeremy Williams
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Hopeu Likadapoem 18 July 2005

This one is so true, We spend our whole life searhing

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Raynette Eitel 18 July 2005

All that is missing with the last line is 'wearing a hat.' Try this poem again without all the rhymes. It is a good idea and made me smile...but the rhymes seemed to take away something. Often when people try too hard to rhyme, they end up having to say things they didn't mean. Just my opinion, mind you. Raynette

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Birmingham, England
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Birmingham, England
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