All I see is distance,
With no spaces inbetween,
A rock without a resting place,
A deadly fall without the scream.
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True love is not born out of lies. Only when you lose love because you got the truth you did not get anything because the suspicion replaced the void. You play beautiful letters. I worship your poetess.
Thank you Jankovic for your generous comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem.
The poem is replete with poignant thoughts and feelings, and evokes such feelings in the readers' minds too, particularly those who are not unfamiliar with the pains of lost love and broken hearts. Well done, dear poetess!
First of all, heartiest congratulations on this beautiful poem being selected as the Member Poem Of the Day! I've liked your poem so much that immediately after having read it, I sat to translate it into my native language, Bangla. If you are interested to have a look at the translation, you may contact me at khairulahsan@yahoo.com
No comfort from the truth I know yes most of the times the Truth is bitter. congratulations for POD.
Lovely poem Sarah. Often life gives us questions with no answers. I love the way you have expressed it so beautifully. Congratulations!
A poignant piece of poetry Sarah! Many congratulations for this beautiful work is being placed on the board!
No light within! ! Lost love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
sarah, i'm impressed by this poem, impressed enough to want to read more by you. the flow, the skillful rhyming, the experience you convey—good stuff. -glen kappy
I love both the poem and the art. Sarah, Congratulations on an excellent Poem Of The Day!
A sad write of what lies ultimately do to a love that might have lasted for ever? .......well penned Sarah
A love lost, both with broken hearts, No justice in the lies, No comfort from the truth I know, All questions hung with casual replies. real situations of life and love. a very fine poem dear poetess.. congrats for POD
Casual replies or handshakes with loose hands are hopeless things.... A nice poem in deed. Congrats for the poem being selected as a member poem. PC
Beautifully portrayed on lost love. Thanks and congratulation for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
And slowly the wheel all in slowly comes as the Answer but, after, all lost! Casual reply; at stake dear.. /// lovely expression
everything yeah everything is there but in distance nothing and none comes but everything hung with casual replies.......///