Sunday, October 28, 2018

Casual Replies Comments

Rating: 4.7

All I see is distance,
With no spaces inbetween,
A rock without a resting place,
A deadly fall without the scream.
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Sarah Persson
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Mahtab Bangalee 16 September 2019

everything yeah everything is there but in distance nothing and none comes but everything hung with casual replies.......///

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Jankovic Zoran 18 May 2019

True love is not born out of lies. Only when you lose love because you got the truth you did not get anything because the suspicion replaced the void. You play beautiful letters. I worship your poetess.

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Sarah Persson 18 May 2019

Thank you Jankovic for your generous comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 28 November 2018

The poem is replete with poignant thoughts and feelings, and evokes such feelings in the readers' minds too, particularly those who are not unfamiliar with the pains of lost love and broken hearts. Well done, dear poetess!

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Khairul Ahsan 28 November 2018

First of all, heartiest congratulations on this beautiful poem being selected as the Member Poem Of the Day! I've liked your poem so much that immediately after having read it, I sat to translate it into my native language, Bangla. If you are interested to have a look at the translation, you may contact me at khairulahsan@yahoo.com

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Hassan Hayati 27 November 2018

No comfort from the truth I know yes most of the times the Truth is bitter. congratulations for POD.

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Savita Tyagi 27 November 2018

Lovely poem Sarah. Often life gives us questions with no answers. I love the way you have expressed it so beautifully. Congratulations!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2018

A poignant piece of poetry Sarah! Many congratulations for this beautiful work is being placed on the board!

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Butch Decatoria 27 November 2018

Lovely and sad... thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 November 2018

No light within! ! Lost love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sarah Persson 27 November 2018

Thank you all so much for your lovely comments 😁

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Glen Kappy 27 November 2018

sarah, i'm impressed by this poem, impressed enough to want to read more by you. the flow, the skillful rhyming, the experience you convey—good stuff. -glen kappy

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Sarah Persson 27 November 2018

Thank you Glen, much appreciated

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Giselle Reuben 27 November 2018

Sarah, a truly lovely write.

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Richard Wlodarski 27 November 2018

I love both the poem and the art. Sarah, Congratulations on an excellent Poem Of The Day!

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Tom Allport 27 November 2018

A sad write of what lies ultimately do to a love that might have lasted for ever? .......well penned Sarah

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Adrian Flett 27 November 2018

A great poem of love lost and the emptiness that remains.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 November 2018

A love lost, both with broken hearts, No justice in the lies, No comfort from the truth I know, All questions hung with casual replies. real situations of life and love. a very fine poem dear poetess.. congrats for POD

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Pallab Chaudhury 27 November 2018

Casual replies or handshakes with loose hands are hopeless things.... A nice poem in deed. Congrats for the poem being selected as a member poem. PC

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2018

Beautifully portrayed on lost love. Thanks and congratulation for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 November 2018

And slowly the wheel all in slowly comes as the Answer but, after, all lost! Casual reply; at stake dear.. /// lovely expression

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Kim Barney 27 November 2018

Very nice, Sarah. Congrats on poem of the day!

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