Stalking in the shadow of syllables
Drooling at the curves of translucent lines
Slipping your warped finger under the hem of stanza
You transverberate through every victims creation
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Powerfully done. Seems so agressively unlike anything else I've read of yours so far. Would love to know what caused it.
Powerfully done. Seems so agressively unlike anything else I've read of yours so far. Would love to know what caused it.
Forthright and powerful writing about stuff that matters to you and us as artists. You rock!
i wish i could understand this as well as the last two commenters seem to. should i watch my crayon?
Outstanding use of oppositional pairings of words.. the sexual energy in this piece is just right...not too little.. not too much. My kind of stufff.
Srevie, this is amazing! I haven't read anything more stirring and it brings me to a sudden pause. What an eye-opening and thought provoking piece! I truly love it! Great Ink! ! ! ; -) -Kelly.
wow i don't know what to say this is great, how like really how did you come up with this, you seem to get better by each piece you post, this is a great piece of poem in my opinion
Strong and evocative, might be best not to share it with your students!