Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Castrate The Crayon Comments

Rating: 4.1

Stalking in the shadow of syllables
Drooling at the curves of translucent lines
Slipping your warped finger under the hem of stanza
You transverberate through every victims creation
...
Read full text

Stevie Taite
COMMENTS
Owain Glyn 06 December 2012

Strong and evocative, might be best not to share it with your students!

0 0 Reply
Red O'mara 26 November 2012

Powerfully done. Seems so agressively unlike anything else I've read of yours so far. Would love to know what caused it.

0 0 Reply
Red O'mara 26 November 2012

Powerfully done. Seems so agressively unlike anything else I've read of yours so far. Would love to know what caused it.

0 0 Reply
Ruby Honeytip 24 November 2012

Forthright and powerful writing about stuff that matters to you and us as artists. You rock!

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 13 November 2012

i wish i could understand this as well as the last two commenters seem to. should i watch my crayon?

0 0 Reply
Thomas Ruffin 06 November 2012

Outstanding use of oppositional pairings of words.. the sexual energy in this piece is just right...not too little.. not too much. My kind of stufff.

0 0 Reply
Kelly Seale 05 November 2012

Srevie, this is amazing! I haven't read anything more stirring and it brings me to a sudden pause. What an eye-opening and thought provoking piece! I truly love it! Great Ink! ! ! ; -) -Kelly.

0 0 Reply
Asif Andalib 02 November 2012

Fabulous. Thanks for sharing

0 0 Reply
Kelvin Owusu 01 November 2012

wow i don't know what to say this is great, how like really how did you come up with this, you seem to get better by each piece you post, this is a great piece of poem in my opinion

0 0 Reply
Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

Kent, England
Close
Error Success