Castles Of Sand Comments
I built my life on the love all surrounding
But everything then seemed to slowly go wrong,
Without a foundation the cracks started forming
Too late for mending, the damage too strong.
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Do I see You as a castle made from sand? ...NO! , , say then, A light house and from here you are shining really brightly Love duncan X
What a beautiful flowing read Andrew, I just loved the whole poem. Nothing out of place, nothing to break the perfection of this write. Delightful. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
I am left thinking that at your foreshore hope will arrive and you will find new meaning in the castles you sculpt... 10 for what you have already placed down here now
Well expressed-hope the subject of the poem will find a solid rock and build a new and lasting legacy-where there is life and breath, there is hope.
A bit sad yes, but a real beautiful write Andrew! ! ! ! * 10 *! ! ! Thad
Andrew, this is lovely, yet so sad. A beautiful poem with nice meter and rhyme. A pleasure to read. Irene
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8/6/2025 11:48:34 AM # 1.0.0
Beautifully written tragic story not as the castles of sand but as Solid statues of rock to remember about human folly and vain adventure in life! Good warning for dreams of vain glory!