Castles Of Sand Comments

Wise your look tried to justify the loneliness of human being. Enjoyed.

Your poem gives a good message about modern marriage, brilliantly written Ratnakar.

Modern marriage, just like a sand castle Under the strife of egos, then crumbles.....so touching and true. Modern marriage is like a castle of sands. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

'Under the strife of egos'! ! ! ! With the muse of the rain washing down the Castles of Sand! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

An alarming truth about the modern marriage, that hardly survives even for a short span of time. It just crumbles down like a sand castle. A pointer at the society in general and of ego, where ethics and morality has taken a back seat. Castle of sand is a remarkable poem with a strong message to the society........10