Sunday, October 4, 2020

Castles In The Sand Comments

Rating: 4.5

As I was walking,
Charlie on the beach
Early one summer morn
There were lots of sand castles
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Pamela lutwyche
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Khairul Ahsan 04 October 2020

Appreciate your observing the activities of the fun loving children at the beach and composing such a beautiful poem. 'Made by little tiny hands With smiles and laughter no doubt Running down to the sea For water running in and out' - loved these lines.

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L Milton Hankins 04 October 2020

What a delightful experience so beautifully chronicled in this poem. Thanks, Pamela.

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