Cold stone bricks,
A Castle of thought,
Holding feelings of myself
A cold starving prisoner.
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Heath! you are a very deep poet, i love your style, i love the way you put words in motion, i love feeling good reading your poems regards Bob
Heath! you are a very deep poet, i love your style, i love the way you put words in motion, i love feeling good reading your poems regards Bob
I love the wonderful way you just sink into this poem...whatever you call it, depression has a way of finding us all...we call it chasing the black dog...great work....excellent piece
great imagery...and comparison with the details of castle in applausable wonderful creation loved it wishes anjali
great imagery...and comparison with the details of castle in applausable wonderful creation loved it wishes anjali
a wonderful theme with a perfect metaphor, depticing the inner chaos and inner strife so well