Sunday, April 21, 2019

Castle Down To Violet Corn -Field Comments

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Castle down to violet corn field

Lo! Life has seized herself at thorny cornfield
Rustle of breeze capturing horrifying atmosphere
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Maahi Priyanka Raj
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 April 2019

In enchanting lavender ambiance beneath the horizon Far down towards the east, surrounds ebony jungle A lonely farm girl is looking for her home on the hills, horrified, Lost in poisonous red -ivy and violet vines Death is appearing to me alike vampires.. help... you kept me in suspense, what happened to that innocent girl. her innocence=? ? ? beautiful picturesque.. description. very poetic dear poetess. thank u. tony

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Mahi Priyanka Raj 24 April 2019

It is dependent upon sheer dedication of her to reach home. " As where there is will, there is way" Hence proven, despite being afraid, her prayers showed the right way to reach her home/ castle. However I also leave it upon readers to figure out the climax of my poem. It is an open ended poetic tale

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