Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Casted Shadows Comments

Rating: 5.0

A casted shadow
falls upon your shoulders
a part of life
that can't be divided
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Dave Alan Walker
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Sally Plumb Plumb 04 September 2015

I understand your shadow comment very well.... we have to live with them.When i was a kid, there was a song with the line 'flickering shadows come and go.'

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Valerie Dohren 04 October 2012

There are many of them, and seem to experience a perverse kind of pleasure out of bringing other people down. They are suffering from an inferiority complex. Well written.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 02 October 2012

It is totally wrong to ruin the life of others! thought provoking poem!

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