Saturday, December 1, 2007

Cast A Stone Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cast a stone and watch it fall
Into the deep blue sea,
While now the waves are breaking on
The shingle and the scree,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Chris Mendros 14 March 2008

it's as if the stone is your heart, sinking in the cold cold sea. Evocative, and brilliantly written.

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Duncan Wyllie 02 March 2008

Dear Andrew I think that if we ever needed a head speaker on this site, you would be amongst those that would come to mind Love duncan X

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Ernestine Northover 26 February 2008

Deep felt passion in this one that is so captivating to read. Lovely flow and sadly moving. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Janri Gogeshvili 08 February 2008

Your verses purposeful lyricism … involves Good favourite images … best wishes...

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Emancipation Planz 01 February 2008

Gone fishing... heartfelt, to cast a stone... solitude... plonk... I have been knocked out by the emptiness... and hope warmth is again upon you..

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