Wednesday, March 8, 2006

Casie Girl Comments

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one thirty in the afternoon
I call her phone
and ask her to breakfast,
she hurries to the diner
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Jon Edward Walker
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Theresa Rayman 08 March 2006

I really like this. You have a great descriptive 'raw' style that gets your message across. Nice work-TGR

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