Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Cash For Clunkers Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its cash for clunkers
So the advertisement read
He abandoned his jalopy
Hurriedly on the sidewalk
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Sandra Martyres
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Ben Gieske 09 November 2009

I like the surprise ending. We tend to take everything so serious these days, it's nice to enjoy some humour.

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Kesav Easwaran 07 November 2009

practical and humorous...liked this write...thanks...10

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Sonya Florentino 05 November 2009

haha, he wasn't a happy driver after that!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 05 November 2009

a humorous poem...and the condition apply is very fine almost invisible...10

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Rakesh Bedi 04 November 2009

quite an amusing poem, sandra...thanks for sharing, dear....

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David Harris 04 November 2009

Sandra, a wonderful humours poem with a beautiful twist in the tale. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Jack Williams 04 November 2009

A nice, short story with a twist.

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Patti Masterman 04 November 2009

...always the fine print, eh? Humorous penning; and never look a gift horse from the gub'mint in the mouth; you're sure to be disappointed..(smile)

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Sandra Martyres

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