Monday, September 23, 2013

Case Closed Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yes, so true, been here before,
vandalized, her heart's locked door
Did she even know the damage he created...
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Susan Lacovara
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Anthony Burkett 03 February 2014

Very powerful lines indeed... loved the analogy to a crime played throughout the lines.. to the perpurtrator is but a game... especially loved the ending... ressurected...

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An open door of sadness swings on the hinges of esoteric expressions that resurrects realization and reality.

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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