Cascades Of Caprices Comments

A great poem Ahmad...Well done. Sid.

Very passionate piece and a lot of nice images you use to express what you feel.

A good poet takes inspiration from anything that he sees and produces great poetry. One great poet of Telugu by name Srisri once wrote, 'A whelp, or a piece of soap or a match stick nothing is useless for poetry'

nicely penned---keep sharing regards anjali

Ahmad, another wonderful combination of nature and the nature within mankind, the need for love and its touching memories. Your ability to intricately and delicately paint a picture of nature and then take us into your heart/mind and sensitive persona is cause for pause and wonder. Thank you. My very best to you and yours! Carol

hmmmmmm melancholy write.............loved it..........

Interestingly written. I like it as written. It is an honest, heartfelt 'piece'. Is it with flaws? Yes. And that, ironically, makes this poem unique. Congratulations, Ahmad.

good write. one change You smiles so mysteriously: put smile istead of smiles. You may read my othernwoman, man can...

ripples of freshness flowing out of these words that rhyme make me read the poem one more time(and more)

A very lucid poem, flows gently like the water Lynda xx

very refreshing, as usual, good job, and a pleasure to read your work.

Lucid drops of waters, very fun to touch your memo. very lovely poem

That is a very good poem