Friday, August 14, 2009

Cascade Of Lemonade Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dry parched tongue and cracking lips
Longing for something wet and pleasing
Experiencing a complete brain eclipse
Losing consciousness …wheezing
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2011

beautiful write....very enjoyable read...

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Marilyn Lott 14 August 2009

Oh yes, ice cold lemonade is so refreshing on a scorching day. I can taste it now, Theresa. Thanks for the refreshment! A '10! ' for your delicious poem. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

Michigan, U.S.A.
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